Camp

Camp at kayaking



At camp we went kayaking at pt England Beach I went with a partner my partner was one of the people in my team and me and my partner fall out of the people slipped,fall. After I went on a kayak be myself and when I got in and started to paddle I felt like I was going to fall out.

camp

I am looking forward to going to the pools because I like swimming. Maybe it will be sunny and hot. People will love going to the pools because it will probably be hot.

I am so nervous about going kayaking because I might fall out and I might get glass in my foot. We are going kayaking at Pt England Reserve and it is awesome. Maybe more people will fall out with me.

Title: Our school picnic

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As Pt England got ready to go to beach we run to the hall.

We got to the beach and Mr Burt talk to as for a bit and then we had lunch and team 1 went swimming fist.

When we had lunch and pt England kids had lunch on the tadpole and it was great.

It was nearly the end of the day and then we had to pack up and we walk back to school.

By Shirquera In room 15.

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Being blinb folded

In the morning room fifteen went to the hall and did a apostolic Coors and we had to do it blind folded. We had to find a person to help and my person was grace and she went first. We had to go through some ropes and grace said to some people to slip and some people didn't slip. When people jumped off the stage some people fall down on the ground I did like some people.