Tuesday, 11 September 2012

Paralympics Shirquera

Yesterday we went to the court and trout we were in the Paralympics. We had to hoop on one leg and back we had to tag the next person it was difficult doing it was hard.

As we were running it was like we were on fire we ran as fast as we could we sprinted to the end and back to the starting line we “said go to the people how were in our team”.Then we got to the end of that game everyone was tired.

The next thing we did was crack the ball as far as we could it was awkward when one of our hands went in the rope when we went to get the ball we could run to get it. When we got back to our partner our partner had to crack the ball as far as they could and go and get when Mr Marks “said go”.


vaifoa said...

Wow shirquera

this is an AMAZING piece of writing you done there.
Well done. Were you really running on fire? That is the best writing ever. I really love your writing but... I think you done a little mistake there. You have a sentence that does not really make sentce. Keep it up ptengland.

lee said...

I shirquera,

Nice writing I loved it all except the wrong words you spelled its really great though just go back and fix them up if you can :)

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