As we were running we got into the track it smelled like I was in a garbage bin I hated it as I keep running and I saw some people slippy it was so funny. But when I got up to the muddy bit I sipped in the mud.
At the finishing line I had to STOP and I felt exhausted and lazily I fall on the grass. I slipped in the mud and I was very messy and when I got home from school I got ready to get in the shower and I got clean and then got ready to go out.
Go Martartoa keep on going get to the end I was so so happy I finished it yeah.
1 comment:
Good first attempt at this weeks writing Shirquera but you need to edit again please. You have spelling mistakes, you have missed capital letters and some of your sentences are actually two and need punctuation to help fix them up.
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