Chris the Detective

WALT: To write a paragraph with only one key idea

Writing A Creative Narrative

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3. Write then post your creative narrative on your blog

Story Starter:

Write advice for a wily detective who gets caught in quicksand.

Planning:

Ones there was a detective named Chris he catched a plane to the jungle and jumped off with a parachute....   

Title:

Chris the detective in  quicksand…..

Start Writing Here:

Detective Chris caught a plane to the jungle with a parachute...When he got there he was looking around the jungle to find new things there. When he was looking around he found a dead monkey the monkey’s name was warren then he changed it to little Chris.

When the Detective changed the monkeys named he picked it up the monkey and put it in the bag. Then he realized that it wasn't died so he took it out and gave it a banana Yeahhh ,,,After all he thought that it won't be a problem to have a Monkey as a pet.   

Then the plane came and he jumped in and went home. When he got home he said (oh my family oh my family) He said OMG It’s good to be home he replied calmly.

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